Sorry for the confusion. I decided to change David's name to Alastair. It's a little older and more ancient too. Plus when I thought about it, David was too close to Rave. Ecspecially if I start calling him Dave.
Thank you for reading my story. I'd love to hear what you think about the story. Please leave comments and ideas to consider.
Thank you again,
~Eclipse.
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